tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-432758570213819975.post4079834675882371453..comments2023-03-25T08:28:42.560-04:00Comments on Shelly Douglas - My Space: THE INTRUDER#WIPITUPWEDNESDAY Shelly Douglashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17593834998672568964noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-432758570213819975.post-22718042257491688452015-03-27T14:28:32.358-04:002015-03-27T14:28:32.358-04:00LOL Shelly, that's to funny. What's that s...LOL Shelly, that's to funny. What's that saying? --the truth is often stranger than fiction-- <br />I think you were to kind to Tong. I'd have taught him a lesson personally, like perhaps a snout full of cyan pepper, or a yummy doggie treat strategically placed in a mouse trap. Melody Parkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12294272123649510565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-432758570213819975.post-13106193515753144132015-03-26T08:15:47.164-04:002015-03-26T08:15:47.164-04:00Thanks, Tara ... love your comment! We're sti...Thanks, Tara ... love your comment! We're still writing this one ... but it's finally wrapping up. This is the second time we've written creepy characters, and it's been a blast! So glad you enjoyed the snippet! Hope you'll stay tuned for more! :)Shelly Douglashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17593834998672568964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-432758570213819975.post-86462567720105086922015-03-26T08:09:52.938-04:002015-03-26T08:09:52.938-04:00Yes, he's a creepy one! So glad we captured ...Yes, he's a creepy one! So glad we captured your interest ... thanks, Jennifer :)Shelly Douglashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17593834998672568964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-432758570213819975.post-20592637867273335112015-03-25T22:24:06.258-04:002015-03-25T22:24:06.258-04:00Suspense! What! Why! Where is this story! Aargh! (...Suspense! What! Why! Where is this story! Aargh! (Also, I really enjoyed it!)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10113336406865788255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-432758570213819975.post-39416981447450742402015-03-25T18:39:10.432-04:002015-03-25T18:39:10.432-04:00Now that was creepy. I've definitely intereste...Now that was creepy. I've definitely interested. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486824276807575493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-432758570213819975.post-47486218933536421942015-03-25T17:42:33.503-04:002015-03-25T17:42:33.503-04:00As much as I'd love to give you answers to all...As much as I'd love to give you answers to all of your questions, we wouldn't want to ruin the mystery of the story! Let's just agree that this man is up to no good and dogs have one hell of a good crotch-sniffing memory! (If you have the time, read my reply to Melody.) Hope I provided you with a little chuckle today, Ms. Mandara :)Shelly Douglashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17593834998672568964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-432758570213819975.post-13130691141122549032015-03-25T17:26:23.047-04:002015-03-25T17:26:23.047-04:00Thanks so much, Joelle. I do love to write a dark...Thanks so much, Joelle. I do love to write a dark scene. We probably have about six scenes from his POV, so I look forward to sharing more. Glad you enjoyed! :)Shelly Douglashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17593834998672568964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-432758570213819975.post-49686790748521248972015-03-25T17:21:55.047-04:002015-03-25T17:21:55.047-04:00Although I can't give you the answers you want...Although I can't give you the answers you want without ruining our mystery ... here is a REAL story that brought back the crotch-sniffing memory: When Mike and I were first married, we lived upstairs from some friends in an old house. They entered from the front door (because they owned the place), and we entered from the back door which led up to our apartment. Anyway, they had a rather LARGE German shepherd who ran to the door as soon as he heard my key go into the lock. I was always the first one home from work, so no one else was in the house at that time of day. No one, except Tong. Yes, his name was TONG, and as soon as I entered the dwelling, Mr. Tong would stick his snout in my crotch and literally lift me off the ground. I was 22 years old, and terrified of the hairy beast - so there was no chance I would ever slap him on the snout. Instead, I lifted my eyes to the heavens and prayed that my crotch smelled the same as it did the last time it was inspected by him. After he was satisfied with my scent, he would back up and let me pass. Obviously, we were never close. Believe me, it's funnier now than it was then. LOL! Thanks, as always, for stopping in to see me. :)Shelly Douglashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17593834998672568964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-432758570213819975.post-54700953997042376072015-03-25T16:52:04.869-04:002015-03-25T16:52:04.869-04:00I'm with Melody... LOL at the crotch sniffing ...I'm with Melody... LOL at the crotch sniffing ceremony - and so damn true! The watcher is still watching, I see, and sneakily at that. What is that man's agenda? It can't be good. And yep - how'd he get the key? And why did the dog know him? WE NEED ANSWERS. Till next week Mssrs Douglas. :) Christina Mandarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16487197962975350440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-432758570213819975.post-38107739183117260502015-03-25T14:44:53.852-04:002015-03-25T14:44:53.852-04:00I really enjoyed the details in this scene; the po...I really enjoyed the details in this scene; the points nicely built with and against the tension.Joelle Casteelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06916035794147846651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-432758570213819975.post-62505279764106668312015-03-25T10:56:10.399-04:002015-03-25T10:56:10.399-04:00Crotch sniffing.... (laughing my head off here) I&...Crotch sniffing.... (laughing my head off here) I'd have given him a slap on the snout instead of a deli treat. <br />Once again you have me on edge here, Shelly. Who is this intruder? How'd he get the key? Why does the dog seem to know him? OH so many questions that need answers. ~sighs~ Melody Parkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12294272123649510565noreply@blogger.com