Tuesday, December 16, 2014


Welcome to WIP IT UP WEDNESDAY!  I’m happy to report that our upcoming title, “Barely Survived”, is almost ready to be submitted to the publisher.  In the meantime, there are a few snippets we haven’t shared yet, so I’ll keep posting on this wonderful hop until we run out. Today's scene doesn't need much background. The last time Daniel invited Jackie to splash around in the hot tub – she started the party without him (ahem).  This time around, things end much better for her ... and our voyeurs are glued to the screen. :) 
He kissed her hand and bowed.  “Prince Charming is at your service.  Shall we start this party for two in the spa?”

Heat gathered quickly in her cheeks.

“Ahh, you’re recalling the last time you went for a swim among the jets.”

Jackie's lips formed a mischievous smile at the vivid memory.

“Tonight, they’re going to serve as a side dish instead of the main course.  Cookie, did I see your bear outside?” She nodded as he extended his elbow, and they took a slow stroll to the back porch.

“Oh my God, it’s chilly out here,” she complained while leaving her clothes on the lounge chair.

“Come on in, the water is warm and inviting.”  Daniel helped Jackie into the hot tub and gently guided her over to the underwater spray.  Sitting close behind her, he bent her legs and arranged her feet against the wall until she was able to feel the pulsating jets on her sensitive pussy.  “Does that feel good, Cinderella?”

“Mmm, Danny, this is delicious,” she moaned and closed her eyes.  “I’m so glad my spa privileges have been reinstated.”

“You may indulge only when I’m participating in the aquatic event.”  Daniel tapped her smooth anus with the pad of his finger.

Resting her head on his broad shoulders, she decided to have some fun baiting him.  “Lube isn’t going to work well underwater.  I can’t believe you didn’t research this on the internet.”

“There will be no pain involved tonight, my love, only pleasure.”

Jackie lifted her bottom slightly as he teased her trembling small hole.  “You’re going to spoil me.  What exactly do you have in mind, kind sir?”

“Reposition yourself on those jets.  I’m going to finger-fuck your ass until your tender kitty is meowing for a release. You will beg for it tonight, and don’t even think about coming until I give permission.  Understand, young lady?”

“Yes, sir.”

After reaching for the bottle of silicone lube on the side of the tub, he coated his finger while watching the exquisite expression of ecstasy form on her face.  He knew how close she was to the edge and slowly slid the tip of his extremity into her slim passage, steadying her with his other arm.

“You like that, don’t you?” he whispered pushing his digit in just a little further.

She nodded her head energetically.

His grin was ear to ear.  “How do you want it tonight?”

“Jesus, you’re going to make me say it?”

He kissed her neck and gently slid his finger all the way in and out, over and over again. “Say it, or I’ll stop.”

“Oh…my...God!  Rough, Danny.  I want it rough and deep!”

“Someone is forgetting the rules.”

“Please, don’t stop.”

“Excuse me?”

“I’m begging you!  Please don’t stop!”

He smiled and vigorously traveled deep into her dark abyss as the pulsing water worked its magic.

“May I please come, sir?”  Breathless, she tossed her head back.

“Yes, my love.  Yes, you may.”

“It’s a shame he has to die.”

“What in the hell are you talking about?” He turned and took his eyes off the screen.

“Daniel is finally growing some balls.  Look how he’s making her beg for that orgasm.  Not a bad technique.”

“You’re going to miss watching them, aren’t you?” His dark brown eyes returned to the bright light.

“Look who’s talking.  You’ve been glued to this screen from the beginning.  I’ve only seen them go at it a couple of times.”

“When this is over, you’ll have so much money, you can pay someone to watch in person.”  Leaning over, he gave him a quick elbow in the ribs.

“Shh-shh.  This is going to be the best part.  Jesus, she’s screaming and begging.  I fucking love this!”

He turned the screen off.  “I hope to God you can focus when the time comes.  You’re starting to worry me.  And I don’t like to worry.”  His eyes lowered to the floor.
That’s all I have for today, folks.  Thanks for stopping by and keep on hopping, there’s so much more to read and enjoy!  Have a great week ~ shelly


  1. As always, Shelly, I love the anal scene. But these voyeurs are driving me mad. MAD I tell you. Who are they? Why are they planning to kill Daniel and why do they have planned for Jackie? The plot behind the plot of this story is truly alluring. Can't wait for this to come out.
    So hurry up and stop teasing me already, woman! ☺

    1. I thought we were finished ... and then ... Mr. Doug decided today that we needed ONE MORE CHAPTER! OY! I'm with you, Melody - I need to see this published! Sorry for teasing you ... really, I am! :)

  2. I'm with Melody. Love the anal. Also love the jets in the spa.... oooh yes. What a scene. I am thinking that the assassin (that's what I think he is, anyway) is having way too much fun playing peeping Tom... hmm. What next Shelly? Gotta know ~Grin~

    1. We had WAY too much fun writing the voyeurs - I can tell you that! Not sure how much more I can spill ... don't want to ruin the mystery, you know! I did write a Christmas scene ... so that might be next ... ;) Always love your visits, Christina! :)

  3. I can't wait for this to be published. I always love your books but this one has me on edge. This looks to be my favorite ever!!! Please send this to the publishers soon. I am begging you. 💖💖💖

    1. I really appreciate your excitement and encouragement, Kyra! We wanted to send this to the publisher by Christmas, but now it looks like it will probably be after the holidays! The mystery in this book makes it a little different, and I do hope you enjoy reading it ... we had a blast writing it! Thanks so much for stopping to see me and LOL on the begging! :)


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