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Tuesday, January 13, 2015

WAS IT REALLY A PUNISHMENT#WIPITUPWEDNESDAY




It’s good to be back on WIP IT UP!  Last week we finally submitted “Barely Survived” and are currently trying to resuscitate an old book that for the past year has been dying to live again!  Allow me to introduce Libby, James and David - who’ve been friends since high school.  They all married outside of their small, comfortable friendship circle after college and, unfortunately, each divorced within five years.  After her divorce, Libby and James got back in touch (literally) and she recently decided to seek advice from their friend, David, about whether she should tell her new boyfriend of her desire for a DD lifestyle.  Naturally, she thought the information would be shocking to both men, but found out the hard way that they were quite familiar with the world of kink.  Funny how that stuff happens in fiction!  We're working on this under the title of "Their Destiny".  Did I mention that Tommy is her ex-husband, James is a firefighter and David is a minister?  Hope that was enough background to enjoy the scene! :) 
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At the end of the day, Libby headed home from work and hoped he was waiting for her.  She quickly unlocked the door and walked straight into the kitchen with a handbag on her elbow and car keys in hand. James wasn’t seated at the table which prompted her to walk nervously from room to room. His car was in the driveway, so she assumed he was somewhere in the house.
 
“James, where are you?”

The house was quiet.

Why didn’t you return my calls today?” she called out, climbing the stairs to the second floor.

And there he was, lying on the bed in her room.   His 6’1” lean body was propped up against two pillows on the headboard, and his long, jean-clad legs were stretched out. 

“You went to visit David, again,” he answered quietly.

“I wanted to know if Tommy unloaded information on him, too.”  She turned to put her handbag and keys on the dresser and hoped he didn't see her quick eye-roll in the mirror.

“And what did your minister in shining armor tell you?” He sighed, while running fingers through his short, dark brown hair.

Libby gazed at the ceiling.  She knew her second visit to David was a bad idea.  "The same thing you did."

James briefly closed his eyes and pinched the bridge of his nose. “I also went to see him.  I thought it was time we had a conversation alone.”

“That’s nice.  What did you talk about?”  She smoothed the comforter nonchalantly with her hand.

“We mostly talked about the DD lifestyle.  I must have stayed for two hours.”

“Sweet Jesus, this can’t be happening,” she mumbled to herself.

“Well, it’s a convenient time to start praying to him.” His tone became lighter and almost playful.

“Come on, James, what did he tell you?  Spill please."  Her hands found their way to her hips.

 “I know David is our friend and has been for a long time.  But it was different before you and I were … involved.”

“Just because David is a man, doesn’t mean I can’t be friends with him.  We’ve been close since high school."  She paused and crossed her arms.  "Oh for God's sake - you’re jealous?  You can't be serious!”

“This is one handsome, single minister you’ve been visiting alone with.”

“You’re much more handsome than he is.”  After some major eye movement, she eventually settled on his magnificent, muscular firefighter frame which was half-dressed and lying on her bed.

“You roll your eyes at me one more time, and you won’t be standing much longer.”  He tilted his head to the side and raised a thick, dark eyebrow.

“You aren’t intending to sabotage my friendship with him, are you?"  Her round, hazel eyes bravely narrowed into slits. 

“I know he’s someone you like to confide in, but it bothers me that he has a crush on you,” he said quietly as he crawled toward her, cat-like, on the bed.

“Really?”  That news was extremely flattering, and she had a hard time hiding her smile.

“I can't believe you didn't know.”

She laughed.  “James, you have nothing to be jealous of.  David and I are just good friends.”

“You are mine, darling.  Only mine.”  He moved carefully, like a cheetah stalks his prey.  There was no need for more conversation, but they had one anyway.  “I’m suddenly in the mood for something sweet."  His moist lips grazed up and down her neck as he removed her top and bra with ease.

“Mmm.  I like the way you think.”

“David and I talked about a variety of punishments," he whispered while pulling off her pants and guiding her onto the bed.

“Uh-huh.”

After tugging down her panties, he tossed them to meet the rest of her clothing on the carpet and moved his head down between her legs.  She could feel his warm breath on her pussy.

“Punishment,” she whispered, nodding her head.

“Don’t move.”  His kisses were light and came quickly as a shiver raced through her body.  “I mean it, Libby.”  He parted her legs and began using his fingers to circle her bud, which was becoming stiff and slick.  She made the mistake of moaning.

“You will not come until I say you can.  I’m sure you’ve read enough books to know what will happen if you do.”

Libby composed herself.  He turned her over and guided her on all fours.  From behind, he crouched down and teased her pussy lips as he slowly slid the tip of his tongue up and down her slick entrance.  

“This isn’t fair, James.” 

“Life isn’t fair, and you will be spanked, so don’t test me,” he replied in the authoritative tone she was hoping for.  Then he added a few little nibbles and pushed her legs further apart, pulling her toward him, so he could put pressure on her clit which was as hard as a pebble.

“James, please.”  Her breathing became short and ragged.

He responded only by sucking quickly and more intently.

“James, stop.  I am going to come.” She pounded her fist on the bed to match each slowly spoken word.

But he didn’t stop.  He went back to using his fingers and fucked her furiously until she could no longer hold back the ocean and pushed herself against him, her orgasm exploding, rocking and beating over and over.  He waited patiently for her body to finally quiet down. 

“You know what’s going to happen next, don’t you?”

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As always, thanks for coming by!  There are a few scenes to this chapter – so, hopefully, I'll be back to continue in the correct order.   In the meantime, keep on hopping – there’s such good reading on this Wednesday hop that our friend, Melody, provides for us!!  Have a great week! ~ shelly 

14 comments:

  1. Oh boy! If that was a punishment, I want one too ☺
    Congratulations on Barely Survived making it to the next step. It's about time ~smirks~ Just kidding. I'm really excited for it to be unleashed. Those voyeurs are still driving me crazy.
    As for Libby, I have a feeling I know what's coming next. Thwap! Thwap! Thwap! ~Grins~
    Loved the comment about this wip dying to live again! Write on, woman. Write on! ☺

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    1. I'm glad you still think of the voyeurs in Barely Survived - its been so long - I Barely Remember them! HA! Between Doug's and our publisher's technical issues - we're lucky it got out at all! :) Thankfully, for now it still lives on in WIPITUP posts! Onward and upward to Their Destiny! Honestly, I thought the resuscitation process would be much easier than it has been. The reason it's been so difficult is that this was originally written as a dark menage. So, if you think it took a long time for our last title to be submitted ... :) Always love your comments, Mel ... keep 'em coming! :)

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  2. NAUGHTY NAUGHTY GIRL... I know what's going to happen next. ~Puts hand up~ Does she get a spanking, does she, does she? Can you tell I'm excited!!! Like the comment about having read enough books to know what was coming next (or not as the case may be...) although she did... so it's a moot point. ~shakes head~ Nice to have you back on wipitup Shelly... can't wait for the new release hoorah :D

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    1. She does, she does ... and I think she's just as excited as you are! Poor girl has been reading those books way too long without any action. Thank God, Doug and I are coming to the rescue! Thanks, Christina - it's good to be back!!

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  3. Interesting scene. I admit, I struggled just a bit to read because I found James' jealousy with David just plain obnoxious, but I think that's more a comment on me and my polyamory than your story. Quite a lovely lead in though, hope the writing goes better with it now.

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    1. Thanks for your honest comment, Joelle. Yes, I agree, his jealously is obnoxious - but hang in there - he admits to his character flaw in the next scene and promises to change his ways. Unfortunately, promises aren't always kept in real life, but in the magic of fiction, he actually does change in this story. There will be plenty of twists and turns of emotion in this one! :)

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  4. Damn the hotness when I'm in a public place! Very nice snippet. (I might be a bit confused here though. The book with the voyeurs, which one is that?)

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    1. Glad you enjoyed the snippet, Tara! This is a new work in progress that we started spinning a couple of weeks ago. The book with the voyeurs is "Barely Survived" which took a ride to the publisher last week. The bags were packed weeks ago - so the trip was way overdue. Fingers are crossed over here as we wait to see how it was received! Thanks for asking! :)

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  5. Great snippet and I'm glad to see you back!! I can't wait to read more of this story!! :-)

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    1. Aww - thanks, Meredith! It's really good to be back, and I'm glad you enjoyed the scene! More to come ... :)

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  6. Smack, thwack, paddy whack? Give that girl a bone... Oh, wait, that's not how it goes unless you're Libby. Lucky girl. Very HOT scene, Shelly, can you send James over to put out my fire?

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    1. Thanks, Maddie - when you say HOT - you make me very HAPPY! :) Yes, Libby is one lucky girl and I'm sure James would love to come right over. Should I have him come alone or bring the whole crew on the truck? LOL!

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  7. Love this scene. Very hot!!! Please post the spanking next week. ;) ;)

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    1. It would be my PLEASURE to post the spanking scene next week! Thanks so much for asking, Jennifer, glad you liked the snippet! :)

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