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Tuesday, January 20, 2015

HER PUNISHMENT CONTINUED#WIPITUPWEDNESDAY



It’s WIP IT UP WEDNESDAY and that time again for a little sneak peek into our work in progress!  As promised, here is a continuation of last week's scene.  Was this really a punishment?  I guess it depends on who you ask. ;)
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“I just gave you a reason to spank me, didn’t I?”

“Yep.  Take those two large pillows I was just lying on and put them under you.  I want your bottom nice and high for me.”

“Was this your idea or David’s?”

“Let’s just say he gave his blessing.”  James' lips curled up at the irony of the statement.

“Maybe you should’ve been a comedian instead of a firefighter.”

“My advice would be to stop the chatter and get that tush up in the air for me.”  His voice was low and clear.

She rolled over and waited nervously for the first smack.  When it didn’t come, she turned her head to look at him.

“No clenching, Libby.  When I punish your backside, it should be as soft as those pillows under you.”

As she relaxed her muscles, his palm made direct contact starting slow and methodically with mild swats to the center of her cheeks.  Much to Libby's surprise, James' enthusiasm intensified as his hand traveled down her fleshy bottom, paying particular attention to the sensitive crease. 

Tears welled up in her eyes as he held in the heat on the lower half of her very warm, red behind.  After a long silence, he pulled her onto his lap and hugged her tight.  Though her vision was somewhat blurred, she still managed to gaze into the depths of his indigo-blue eyes.  “I’m really sorry, James.  I never meant to hurt you.”  

“This is not your fault, Libby.  Jealousy is an ugly flaw of mine that needs to be extinguished immediately.  Honestly, I trust you as much as I adore you."

She cried as he held her in his arms and softly kissed the top of her head.  The last thing she remembered was James carefully tucking her into bed with a sheet.  As his lips tenderly brushed over her forehead, Libby slowly closed her tired eyes and fell into a deep sleep.
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Is it just me, or does anyone else feel a dream sequence coming on?  LOL!  Keep on hopping, my friends, there’s a ton of good reading on this hop!  Have a great week ~ shelly

10 comments:

  1. I loved the first two lines! “I just gave you a reason to spank me, didn’t I?” "Yep." At least Libby knew that she had done something bad. Great snippet!

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    1. She knew what was coming ... there's no doubt about it! Thanks, Meredith - glad you liked! :)

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  2. "Maybe you should have been a comedian instead of a firefighter."
    I always adore your heroines snarky attitudes while they're being punished.
    Great snippet, Shelly. ☺

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    1. Aww ... thanks, Melody. I'm glad you enjoy their little bit of attitude. Can't imagine where they get it from! :)

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  3. Hee hee, I'm with Melody - I love the wonderful touches of sarcasm and indeed the enthusiasm the hero of the piece sets to spanking our poor little heroine's tush. I do love me a male who's green with envy and is prepared to show it with his hands... oh dribble, dribble, dribble!!!

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    1. Thanks so much, Christina! Yes, he does apologize for being jealous - but don't those hands always speak louder than words - especially when there's so much more to say! :)

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  4. I'm a little late the party as usual. Great scene. Dream sequence please. :)

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    1. Thanks for stopping by, Jennifer! Glad you enjoyed! :)

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  5. beautiful :) I love the pillows and he's so perfect here :)

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    1. Thanks so much, Joelle! It was a fun scene to write! :)

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