HAPPY WIP IT
UP WEDNESDAY! I didn’t give you much
background last week on our new WIP, “The Sail of Their Lives”, so I’ll take
the opportunity to fill you in now:
Five years
ago, Daniel Bonerati, his wife, Christina, and younger brother, Joey, were
sailing on Dan’s boat – when it exploded at sea, leaving him the only survivor. This cold case was recently handed over to a
new authority, and Jackie (Joey’s wife) has been summoned back to Hilton Head
by the police for more questioning. The
explosion, originally deemed an accident, has turned into a full-blown
murder investigation.
Daniel, her
handsome, large, strapping, gentle brother-in-law invites Jackie to stay at his
house on the beach for a couple of weeks, and their long-standing, solid
friendship of over twenty-five years quickly turns into a romance. Even though she is horrified to learn that Daniel
knows all about the lifestyles she and her late husband practiced (DD and
age-play), it is comforting to have found someone she can be herself with again,
and Daniel is only delighted to summon his inner dominant personality…
Because this
story is a murder mystery, I will try to be careful and share only sex and
punishment scenes. Otherwise, there will
be way too many spoilers :) I hope you
enjoy reading the snippets to come. We've had so much fun writing them! ;)
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Daniel stared at her in disbelief.
“Don’t shoot me - I’m just the messenger. Wait a minute. Are you upset that I had lunch with Julie?”
“Of course not, but I thought we felt the
same way about gossip. I don’t want you involved in that sort of dialogue, especially with my partner’s
wife. You never know what could be taken
out of context.”
“I was listening, not sharing.” Jackie
crossed her arms in defense.
“It doesn’t matter. Gossip is still bad news. And why do I feel there’s more to this story
you’re not telling me?”
“I don’t know what you’re talking about.”
“The innocent look is not going to do you
any good, young lady. We’ve been through
this before. I don’t want you playing
detective. If you are gathering
information on my friends and colleagues to pass on to Detective Andrews, then
you’re in big trouble. This
investigation is a serious matter, and no suspicion should be cast onto anyone
without real, hard facts backing it up.
The idle gossip you are engaging in could cause serious repercussions. Do you remember what happened the last time
you tested me on this issue?”
“Yes.” Her head lowered along with her
eyes.
He lifted her chin with the pads of his
fingers. “You can do better than that.”
“Yes, sir.”
“Upstairs, right now,” he said
quietly. “Change into your nightgown and
wait for me on your bed.”
“We haven’t even had dinner, yet.” Defiantly, Jackie’s mood changed along with her
posture.
“Take those hands off your hips and move
your feet upstairs. Now.” His voice remained calm, but stern.
When Daniel entered her room, she was
sitting on the side of the bed dressed in a long nightshirt. “This is a very dangerous game you’re playing,
Jackie, and it needs to stop this minute.”
She nodded, but didn’t look him in the
eye.
“Look at me, please.” He spoke softly as
he moved the hair from her eyes.
She took a deep breath and gently took
his hand in hers. “Joey and Christina were my family, too. I just want to help.”
“Don’t you understand? I can’t lose you. Haven’t we both lost enough already?”
“Do you really think I’m a target? Daniel, someone exploded a boat that I wasn’t
on, remember?”
He reached over and propped two pillows
up by the headboard. “Scoot your bottom
over here and get comfortable,” he said in a low tone as he helped her into
position.
“What are you going to do?” She looked
nervous and obeyed his command.
He silently reached into his dresser drawer
and pulled out a clear, plastic bottle. “After all these years, I think we need to
become better acquainted. You don’t seem
to understand when I am joking or serious.”
“Of course I know w-when you are
serious,” she stuttered nervously.
“Unfortunately, it’s a little late to
come to that conclusion.” He calmly unsnapped the lid and generously
coated his finger with a glob of the slippery substance.
She raised her eyes to the ceiling as he
gently bent her knees and patted her bottom.
“Lower your panties, young lady.”
She reached under her nightshirt, lifted
her bottom off the bed and slid her panties down to her knees.
“Take them all the way off. It will make it easier when you walk over to
the corner later.” He turned his head slightly and winked at her.
Grimacing, she rolled her panties all the
way down and handed them to him as she shook her head.
Gently, he held her ankles with one hand
and applied the pad of his finger to her sensitive bottom hole. She looked at him briefly, and then squeezed
her eyes shut as the tip of his finger slipped in a little further.
“I need to see your eyes, Jackie.”
She obediently opened the lids of her chestnut
brown eyes and gasped as his finger edged in a little deeper. “Let’s go over this one more time, shall
we? Do you remember the last
conversation we had about this investigation?”
She nodded as her pupils dilated. He slowly pushed his long, thick digit deep into
her rectum and it stung. After keeping
it in position for a minute, he finally spoke as they stared into each others
eyes. “The next time I hear that you are
gathering information for Detective Andrews, I will bend you over this bed and
punish your little bottom hole with something much thicker and harder than my
finger. Do you understand?”
“Yes, sir.”
She watched the satisfied expression on
his face as he removed his finger and reached for a disposable wipe. Quickly placing his arms under her, she was
lifted away from the headboard.
“I
promised you a reddened bottom, didn’t I?” He slowly raised his head and waited
patiently for an answer.
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I really appreciate that you stopped by today and hope you enjoyed a little taste of our WIP!! Don't forget to hop over and visit the other blogs before you go - there are some great authors who love to share!! ~ shelly
I love this scene, found a new blog to follow as well!
ReplyDeleteWelcome, Larissa!! I'm so happy you enjoyed the scene! I will try to continue posting snippets from this work in progress weekly, so we hope to see you again! Thanks for stopping by! :)
DeleteI really hope that your cover comes soon! Just by the blurb it really makes me want to read this book! Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Meredith! From your mouth to God's ear about the cover! LOL! I'm happy you enjoyed the snippet - we've had this WIP on the back burner for so long that I'm excited to finally share some scenes! Glad you liked! :)
Deletegood luck with this one, seems to be going in a very interesting direction
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming to see me, Joelle! I hope you continue to enjoy! :)
DeleteGod Shelly, I can't get over how you can make anything having to do with anal into such a tender and over the top hot scene. The way he talks to her, reminding her about the dangers of her meddling while he's inserting his finger. Is it punishment or is it pleasure. I know what it is for me... *wink-wink* but hopefully Jackie heeds his warnings.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite part of this snippet is where he tells her to get her hands off her hips and her feet up the stairs.
I'm so glad you liked this scene, Melody! I chopped the chapter up into three parts - anal, spanking and sex ... so it wouldn't be too long for everyone to read. Damn - it was so much fun to write!! I do love that we are on the same anal page! ;)
DeleteI bet he's one who fulfills his promises.
ReplyDeleteTweeted.
Oh, indeed he is, Daryl! Good call! :) Thanks so much for the tweet - and for stopping by to see me! :)
DeleteOh my God this was so freaking hot!! The plot has hooked me already too! I can't wait for it to be released!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Corinne!! I'm really glad you enjoyed our scene ... we've had a blast writing this! :)
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