Tuesday, September 2, 2014


WELCOME TO ANOTHER WIP IT UP WEDNESDAY!  This week I’m bringing you yet another scene from our upcoming novella “The Author’s Friends”.  In today’s installment, Dana continues to pen her untitled novel.
Dana wanted to expand the boundaries of Brad and Kristin’s lovemaking, giving her readers fresh new scenes to experience.  She had an idea and was excited to get started; hopefully, she could make her vision work.

It was Brad’s birthday that weekend.  Kristin wanted it to be forever memorable and carefully laid the groundwork.  She cherished the fact that Brad had exposed her to so many new things, but took pride in throwing him a curve now and then.  Variety was the lifeblood of their relationship, and she wanted his special weekend to be a mind-blowing one. 
Brad arrived at Kristin’s apartment shortly after work on Friday.  There was no reason to think she’d planned anything, since he never told her it was his birthday.  No fanfare was needed; as far as he was concerned, a quiet intimate night with his girl was all he wanted.

Happy to have his own key to her apartment, he arrived at six with the intention of making himself comfortable.  Upon entering the living room, he was surprised to find Kristin’s good friend, Marla, sitting on the couch.  Brad had met her several times before and often wondered why this stunning woman wasn’t dating anyone.  He estimated her to be about 5’6” - with shimmering long black hair and a shapely figure that turned a head or two wherever she went.  Brad was no exception to that allure, but naturally he was smart enough to keep his thoughts to himself.  Marla greeted Brad with a big hug and a kiss on his cheek; my God she smelled delicious. 

“Marla, I didn’t expect to see you here.”  His face flushed nervously like a teenage boy getting caught with an erection.

“Kristin said it was your birthday today and asked me to come by and help celebrate.”  She had a gleam in her eyes that he wished he hadn’t seen … or maybe he had.

The two of them sat down on the couch; Marla seated herself a little closer than he’d expected, and her proximity was definitely making him anxious.  After an uncomfortable silence, Kristin appeared from her bedroom adorned in a pink satin robe, and Brad just assumed she was in the process of getting dressed.  But before he could speak, she took off her robe and was wearing nothing but white lace thong panties.  Sauntering over to the bar, she poured three glasses of wine.  With her back to them, Brad had a fine view of her beautiful round ass which managed to keep his mind occupied and his mouth closed, for the time being.

Kristin served the wine then walked over to the other side of the room, giving them space to get acquainted.  Marla rose and without saying a word pulled the short black dress up over her head, which left her wearing only a pair of black bikini panties and a long pearl necklace.  He glanced at Kristin and watched as her mouth formed the words, “Happy birthday.”

She and Brad once talked about their fantasy of having a threesome, but like most guys, he never really believed it would ever happen … and now his dream was about to become a reality.  Without hesitation, he sat his glass of wine down on the table and slowly walked over to Marla who wrapped her arms around his neck pulling him closer, lightly kissing him on the mouth.  As his tongue teased between her lips, he cupped the weight of her breast in his hand and lightly pinched a nipple.  Their dancing tongues slipped in and out of each others mouths gaining momentum and moving hungrily, occasionally pulling tenderly on a lip with strong teeth.  Wearing a crooked smile on her face, Marla ran her slim fingers over the bulge in his pants and pulled the zipper down. 

“These need to come off, right now.” Marla quickly yanked his pants down and bent over to take his rising cock in her mouth, swirling the soft silky skin of the broad tip with her tongue; a few drops of his salty pre-cum were a welcome taste on her lips.  Catching a peek of Kristin in the shadows across the room with the corner of her eye, she stroked and pulled his cock happily, feeling it stretch and harden, wondering how she would be able to take all of his length and girth in her small mouth. 

Marla accepted the challenge, taking Brad further into her throat while waving Kristin over to join them.  Wanting his girl to feel included, he pulled out of Marla’s mouth and moved onto his back as Kristin happily removed her panties and positioned her pussy over his lips.  As he licked and nibbled on her clit, Marla cupped and gently played with his balls while kissing Kristin sweetly, tracing a path with her tongue to suck on a pink and erect nipple. 

“I think it might be fun to watch.”  Brad slowly slid to the floor hoping to catch the two of them play for a moment, as Marla moved her hands down Kristin’s body, touching and twirling her short mound of light pubic hair.  As he gazed at the scene in front of him, Kristin gently maneuvered Marla until she was beneath her on hands and knees.  Brad moved quickly behind her and placed his cock at the entrance of her wet pussy as Kristin rubbed and rounded her hard, swollen clit. 

“Someone’s been a naughty girl.”  Brad smacked her ass hard, causing a moan to escape from the back of her throat, while driving in and out of her with strong thrusts.  He knew his eruption was near, and pulled out quickly not wanting the fun to end, just yet.

Kristin had maneuvered between Marla’s glistening thighs, intently licking the nectar that had dribbled down and waved her bottom back and forth, jealous of the attention Marla had just received. 

“Does my Kristin need a spanking, too?”  Brad knew exactly what she was looking for and turned her bottom red while she nibbled on Marla, successfully bringing both women to grinding, pounding orgasms as they arched their backs and lifted their hips.  Moaning with smiles on their faces and hearts beating furiously, they instantly turned to Brad who was on the brink of explosion, holding on by a thread.

Together, they took turns sucking and licking his veined stiff cock, until he was unable to control himself any longer.  In long spurts, Brad’s hot cum sprayed over Kristin’s breasts, and with a happy face, Marla licked them clean.  Not a drop was spilled, and the night was far from over!


Whew!  That was exhausting!  Thanks for coming by to visit, and don't forget to hop over and visit the other posts before you go.  There's some great reading awaiting you!!  ~ shelly


  1. If that was just the beginning of their night I bet it was exhausting.

    1. I was exhausted just reading it! ;) Thanks for stopping by to see me and thanks for the Tweet!! :)

  2. Well that was fun as hell!! Great snippet!!!

    1. Thanks Megan!! Glad you enjoyed and thanks for coming by to comment! :)

  3. Is it bad to say that I am really getting into Brad and Kristin, maybe a tinsy bit more than Dana herself?
    Hot damn, lady. You put together on HELL of a birthday surprise for Brad. I loved this menage, and to think that the night is still young? Yeowsha!
    I need a shower after that steamy excerpt. Thank you, Shelly ♥

    1. I'm right with you ... it's hard not to like Brad and Kristin! I'm so glad you enjoyed and glad to see you that you're better!!
      Thanks, as always, Melody!! :)

  4. love Brad and Kristin :) hot scene

    1. Thanks, Joelle! I only have one more scene to share with Brad and Kristin in it! I'll be sad to see them go! ;)


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