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Tuesday, November 4, 2014

AN ANAL ADMISSION #WIPITUPWEDNESDAY



Welcome to WIP IT UP WEDNESDAY!  If you enjoy reading snippets that haven't been published yet, you've come to the right place!  Once again, thanks to Melody for giving us the opportunity to share our bits of love. This scene is from our WIP, “The Sail of Their Lives”.  Just to fill in those who haven't been following - Daniel is Jackie's brother-in-law.  They both lost their spouses in a boat explosion five years ago and this is their first romantic relationship since.  They're extremely comfortable with each other and have been good friends for over twenty-five years - but, obviously, are just learning about each other sexually.  This is their first anal encounter.  Hope you enjoy it as much as they did! 

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Jackie woke up in Daniel’s arms as he spooned behind her.  “I’m sorry about last night,” she said rubbing her bottom on his stiffening cock. “You were so sweet to hold me until I fell asleep."

“You don’t ever have to pretend with me.  How can I help you feel safe if I don’t know when you’re frightened?

"This is just a guess, but I’m assuming you had other plans.” She giggled as Daniel lightly stroked the cleft of her backside.

“I was hoping to have your hot, luscious ass bent over this bed with my cock lodged deep inside it."  He laughed.  "Lucky for us, Matt didn't come home last night.  We certainly need to watch our noise level these days."
 
“What is it you want to do to my ass?  It’s been so long since you've given me the details, I can’t recall,” she taunted over her shoulder with a snide smile.

He angled his head while tossing the comforter aside and quickly landed a loud swat on her bare, smooth globe.  “I'm happy to refresh your memory.  Are you sure you want this now?”

“Oww.  Yes, Danny.  I’m sure.” She rubbed the sting out of her bottom with one hand and turned to affectionately tease his rising penis with the other. “We've both been out of practice for so long - do you remember how?"  

Furrowing his brow, he lowered Jackie’s head onto a pillow for comfort and raised her hips effortlessly with both hands.   She seductively waved her behind back and forth while sneaking a peek at his expression. 

“Face forward.” His tone was playful as he landed another smack onto her bottom.  Shaking his head, he reached for the container of gel lubricant.  “I love your sense of humor, Cookie.  But do you really think someone with her bare ass in the air should be that sarcastic?”  He coated his finger and, without much ceremony, slid it into her anus.

"Gahh!  You could’ve warned me,” she whimpered and squirmed.

He administered a third sharp crack to her backside while his slippery, long extremity gently continued further into her tight opening.  “That will be enough, young lady.  I only want to hear two words from you right now."

“Yes, sir.”

“You always were a smart girl.”  He gently sunk his teeth into her fleshy cheek.  “Are you sure you want something much bigger than my finger in your bottom?  We both know it’s going to hurt.” Slowly pumping his digit all the way in and out, he patiently waited for an answer.

“Yes.”

“Excuse me?”

“Yes, sir,”

After generously lathering his thick cock with gel, he fisted it quickly making sure it was good and hard.  As he gently separated her cheeks and pressed the smooth, misty tip to her anxious anus, she gasped.

“I promise to be as gentle as I can.”

“Jesus, that hurts,” she whined into the pillow and gradually lowered her bottom as he edged his broad, shiny head into her tight, warm hole.

Slowly raising her hips with both hands again, he spoke softly. “Think about something else, baby doll.”

“Oh my God! Are you kidding?  This is like an elephant trying to charge through a mouse hole.”

He applied more gel as he inched in further.  “Take a deep breath and when you exhale, bear down.  It will make it easier for me to go deeper.”

“Where in the hell do you come up with these crazy tips?  Are you reading 'Dear Abby', again?”  Her breathing was ragged as she spoke through gritted teeth.

“I found it in an erotic romance novel that cost me $2.99.  It was worth every penny.”  He grinned and administered another good, hard smack to her tush.  “Can we go back to the two-word rule, please?  I’m starting to wonder who’s in charge here.”

“Come on, we both know whose charging here.  Oww!”

Once again, Daniel’s large palm quickly left her hip and landed sharply on her tender ass.  “It seems my hand isn’t making much of an impression this morning.  Would you like me to find your hairbrush?  You know how fast I can switch activities when the mood strikes me.” 

“No, sir.”  With her eyes squeezed tightly, Jackie finally took a deep breath and pushed as he moved beyond her tight ring.

“That’s it.  You’re so snug, my love.” 

Jackie opened her tear-filled eyes as he finally seated himself.  His wet fingers played with her hardening clit, but she shook her head.

“I don't need a distraction, Danny.”

“You are enjoying this, aren’t you?”  

Jackie nodded and raised her ass up higher as he withdrew almost all the way out and slowly slid back in.  His strides were long and smooth as he continued the motion, kneading her plump bottom in his hands.  She held onto the pillow tightly and reveled in every hard breath he took. 

“I want you to fuck me, Danny.  Fuck me hard,” Jackie whispered loud enough for him to hear as she turned her head once again to see the expression on his face.  She knew he didn’t need much more to bring him to the edge.
With just a few more drives, his mouth contorted as he threw his head back.  “Jesus, Jackie.”

She buried her face into the pillow leaving her bum up in the air.  As her rectum filled with the spray of his hot semen, not a word was spoken.  Finally, she lowered her hips and they relaxed back into their original spooning position.

Nuzzling his nose onto her cheek, he inhaled and kissed her sweetly.  “I love your scent, Cookie.”  He pulled her closer.  "All comedy and histrionics aside, how much did you really enjoy our morning together?"

"Shall I sing the chorus of 'My Favorite Things?'"  


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Thanks so much for coming to see me today!  Before you go, please take your time and visit all the other blogs on this hop.  You’ll find some great reading on this list!  ~ shelly

16 comments:

  1. I love their conversation here among the anal stimulation :)

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    1. Thanks so much, Joelle!! I'm really glad you liked this!! :)

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  2. Haha! Shelly I love reading your posts! They're always SO amazing!

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    1. Aww, that's so nice of you to say, Meredith! I appreciate your encouragement! :)

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  3. “I found it in an erotic romance novel that cost me $2.99." I know all about those kind of novels ~grin~ Lovely piece. You know that anal is one of my favourites but this pretty much hits the spot from start to finish. Lovely build up of tension, some pretty damn fine instructions and your wonderful blend of humour make this one of my favourites. Same place, same time next week? :D

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    1. I'm so happy you liked this!! I was kind of worried that the humor would take the heat element down too much ... but I thought it would be fun to keep it real, you know? I mean, they've been good friends for over 25 years! ;) I always look forward to your comments ... thanks so much, Christina! :)

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  4. Loving the humour here. Great snippet

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    1. Really, really nice of you to say, Ashe!! So glad you enjoyed it! :)

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  5. Anxious anus. LOL. That's great. I used frightened anus once, and I thought that was pretty good, but yours is better! :)

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    1. I distinctly remember commenting on your blog, there's nothing better than a frightened anus ... and I really meant it! :) Thanks for the compliment, but I LOVE yours!

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  6. I'm so glad you gave us more from this - last week you really caught my attention but now you have me gagging for more. I love the interaction between Jackie and Danny. (and lets not even go into the other hot stuff that was going on too)

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    1. I'm so excited you like this, Tara! They are close friends and so the honestly just flows naturally! Thanks for wanting more ... that's music to my ears! :)

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  7. OMG... You made me spit out my water. “Oh my God! Are you kidding? This is like an elephant trying to charge through a mouse hole.” Are you trying to kill me over here woman, I nearly choked as I read that. My sides are sore from laughing. Love this... Love it so MUCH!
    It reminded me so much of my first anal experience... errr wait, I probably shouldn't admit that. lol
    This is a really great scene, Shelly. Hot anal and humor to boot... You've made my day. I just hope I don't think of this scene during my class tonight and bust out laughing. ☺

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    1. I read your comment and cracked up, Melody! You seriously made MY day by enjoying this so much! Thanks for this compliment and ALL your comments! They are appreciated more than you could know! :)

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  8. Can we go back to the two-word rule, please? I’m starting to wonder who’s in charge here. - Sex and wit, great combination - great scene.

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    1. What a cool compliment! Thanks so much ... I'm really glad you liked this! I can't wait to share all these nice comments with Doug tomorrow! :)

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