Tuesday, November 11, 2014


Welcome to WIP IT UP WEDNESDAY!  If you like reading a work in progress, you have come to the right place!  This scene is from our WIP, “The Sail of Their Lives”, and the title is due to change any day!  In the meantime, here’s a snippet of Jackie and Daniel.  I don’t think much background is needed for this one. :)


“Would my Cookie like to splash around in the hot tub?

Her eyes shined.  “You always know how to change my channel.”

“Be a good girl and put your swimsuit on." He spun her around and applied a swift, loving palm to her bottom.

Jackie excitedly ran up the steps to undress while Daniel opened the afternoon mail.  Minutes later, he walked through the sliding glass door and couldn’t believe his eyes.  With legs bent and spread, Jackie had positioned herself in front of the spraying jets while holding on to the sides of the tub. 

“Jacqueline Anne Bonerati, stop that this instant!” he shouted approaching the spa.

“Oops.  I thought it would take you longer to change out of your clothes.  Why are you still dressed in a shirt and tie?” Jackie’s head turned, but her body remained pressed to the wall.

He rolled up the sleeves on his white cotton shirt.  “If you don’t move away from there, you’re going to be a very sorry little girl.”

“Come on, you’re no fun.” She threw her head back and closed her eyes as her pussy thrummed.

“Don’t test me, Jackie.  I’m not in the mood for your shenanigans today,” he wagged his finger and warned in a stern tone.

She wiggled and waved her bottom.  The powerful underwater spray pulsed forward onto her eager, shaved pussy.  Repositioning herself closer to the jets, she made the mistake of moaning as her excitement mounted.  

“I’ll show you how much fun I can be, young lady.” Reaching around Jackie's waist, he pulled her off the wall effortlessly and carried her dripping wet body, with arms and legs flying, over to a nearby lounge chair.

She stood beside him and shrugged.  “You asked if I wanted to splash around in the tub.”

“Do you remember me warning you about pleasuring yourself?”

Her eyes shot upward as she touched her chin with one finger, the perfect image of a child trying to ponder.  “I think so,” she admitted with a giggle.

He nodded.  “Now we’re heading in the right direction.  What did I say would happen the next time you were caught with wandering fingers?”

“But my fingers weren’t wandering,” she brazenly teased while wiggling the digits on both hands.  

“This is your last chance to answer before I remove my belt.”  As he reached to unbuckle the metal, Jackie cleared her throat and dropped her head.  Daniel watched her face gradually redden with heat and loved every minute. 
“I would be spanked.” Her voice was soft and humble.

She was immediately taken by the hand and escorted over to the corner by the sliding glass door.  “Place your nose and hands against this cement wall and push your bum out.” 

She looked at him over her shoulder with pleading eyes.


As she quickly complied, he roughly pulled the bottom of her one-piece bathing suit toward the center and wedged it tightly into her cleft.  Making sure she was properly leaning against the wall, he promptly landed a loud, hard smack to both wet, bare cheeks.  “You will stand in this corner with your drenched bathing suit nestled into the crack of your bottom until I say otherwise.  Do you understand, Jackie Anne?” he asked while creating one more solid handprint on each vibrant, moist mound.

“Yes, sir,” she whimpered respectfully.

“You are not to move for fifteen minutes.”  He turned and walked to the other side of the porch to admire his girlfriend’s beautiful reddened ass from a distance.  “Your hot tub privileges are suspended until further notice.”  

She whined and tried to reach back to reposition her suit.

“If I see your hands move off that wall one more time, my disobedient little girl is going to be sleeping on her tummy tonight due to a flat-backed hairbrush making repeated contact with her glowing backside.  Have I made myself clear?”

She nodded and shuffled from one foot to the other.

“Be still, young lady and answer me properly.”

“Yes, sir,” she mumbled.

His cock swelled.


Thanks so much for coming to see me today!  Before you go, please take your time and visit all the other blogs on this hop.  You’ll find some HOT reading on this list!  ~ shelly


  1. Love the title of your post.Now I have that song 'Bennie and The Jets' by Elton John ringing in my ears.
    A girl knows she's in trouble when her man uses her full name.
    I'm also on her side with this one, she wasn't using her fingers.
    Come on, Danny, be a sport and join her in the hot tub! Slip in behind her and... (well, you know where my mind is running with this, right Shelly? LOL) ☺

    1. Thanks, Melody ... we both know this isn't the first time I caused a tune to ring in your ears! :) I'm sure Doug would agree with you on this one - he wanted a sex scene in the hot tub and I turned the tables on him! (And yes, I know where your mind is running ... usually right beside mine! LOL. ;)

    2. This is true and I must admit I sound better going about the house humming Elton John as compared to Micky Mouse. LOL.
      How about posting a deleted scene about the hot tub sex that didn't take place. He slips in behind her and behind her and behind her.... lol. I am such an anal freak! sorry it's all yellow inner-voices fault.

    3. Well, since we aren't completely finished with this book ... and even though I have been assigned to write certain scenes ... I guess I COULD "slip" in an extra one. But don't tell yellow inner-voice or Doug. It'll be a surprise! :)

  2. Wet bottom spanking...OUCH! She should have listened when he was warning her! :-)

    1. I know, Meredith, but she just couldn't resist those jets!! Who could?? LOL!

  3. Oh the joys of a power shower...
    Great excerpt

    1. Thanks so much, Ashe! I'm smiling over here just thinking about it! ;)

  4. Those jets can be a powerful thing ~grin~ And she was right, her fingers were nowhere near - so I think he's being very unfair.
    That doesn't mean that I think he should forgo the spanking, however. Give it to her good Daniel and tan that backside red raw. Sleeping on your tum is a small price to pay for a darn good spanking ~giggle~

    1. Geez, Christina ... I read your first line and I had to go back and make sure it was coming from you. I felt so alone and confused. Ahh, but then I read your next line and felt sooo much better. :) He does give her bare tush a good walloping with the back of a hairbrush later in the book ... I may just have to look for that scene to post. Thanks for the inspiration! :)

  5. I'm afraid I'd do the same thing if I were in Jackie's place. Those jets are some good goodness!

    1. Agreed! I wouldn't pass those jets up either!! And she knows Daniel would never miss an opportunity to give her a good spanking ... ;)

  6. wow, amazingly hot scene, Shelly. I love her bratting!

    1. Thanks for the nice compliment, Joelle! She's had a lot of bratting practice! LOL!

  7. Nothing quite as sexy as a belt being unbuckled ... :-) Jane xxx

    1. Thanks, Jane! It's one of those classic images that never seems to get old! So glad you like it, too! :)


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