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Tuesday, June 23, 2015

DECEPTION#WIPITUPWEDNESDAY



HAPPY HUMP DAY AND WELCOME TO WIPITUP!  In the last scene we posted from our latest work in progress, The Attraction, Mika and her boyfriend, Rick, seemed to be enjoying themselves, but alas, he never called her again.  Just to keep you up to speed, this was her final attempt on the Internet spanking forum to find a younger man interested in a kinky lifestyle. This snippet also took place in her lavish Manhattan apartment, and in case you're wondering, Stanley is her doorman. :)

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Staring into space, Mika remembered the last man she’d met on her favorite spanking forum two days earlier.  She loved the uncertainty and the diversity that came with meeting new men, but this last one frightened her.  He was different than Rick, darker and deceptive.  It wasn’t just his severe demeanor, but dishonesty that struck a chord of fear within her.  She wasn’t usually afraid, but this young man was peculiar …

“You, come here.” The handsome, young muscular man sitting on the couch beckoned her with a curved finger.

“You have an unusually heavy drawl.  Where did you say you were from originally?  Was it Atlanta?”

He rolled his eyes.

Mika took a deep breath trying to calm herself.  When she and this man broke away from the group and chatted by themselves, he asked if she was willing to role play with him.   She knew better than to have a real life conversation in the middle of a scene.

“You’re not too old for a good, hard spankin’ over my knee, young lady.  Since when is it okay to be so disrespectful?”

“I’m sorry.”  Mika shook her head and backed away.  “It just slipped out.”

The young man stood up and unbuckled his belt.  He appeared to be on the shorter side, but strong.  Mika’s eyes widened as she watched him pull the leather strap from the hoops in his jeans.

“You never said anything about using a strap.”

“And I never agreed to an interview.  Now come over here and take your punishment.”  He doubled the thin black strap and dramatically pointed it at her.

Mika shook her head and crossed her arms in defiance.  “This scene is over.  We talked about a bare-bottom spanking over a knee with your hand.  This is not the same.”

“Oh, you older women are such a tease.  And now I have a real hard-on to see your ass good and red.  This is your last chance, Mika.  If I have to come over and get you …”

Mika turned to run, but he had her in his grasp within seconds.

“Please, no, Steve.  I’m afraid of the strap,” she implored in a desperate tone.

“Oh, the begging is a glorious touch, bad girl.  But my name isn’t Steve and I’m not originally from the South,” he said as his drawl morphed into a New York accent.

“Jesus, you’re scaring me, please just let me go,” she pleaded, wondering if Stanley noticed what this man looked like when they walked past him to enter the building.

He dragged Mika to the couch and pulled her over his knee.  In one brisk movement, her long skirt was moved upward.  Wearing thong panties, her bottom was full and bare. 

"Don’t you ever speak to me like that again,” he said as the strap fell hard with each word. “You’re getting exactly what you deserve, you old slut…”

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OY!  To say this scene didn't go well for Mika, is an understatement!  But don't be too sad for her, because the next time we get together on this hop, she'll be dating a handsome, young detective who just so happens to be heading up a murder investigation in NYC!  Thanks, of course, to Melody (our hostess with the mostest) for providing us with this fun place to read and hop!  Have a great week :)  ~ shelly

10 comments:

  1. I got a cold shiver down my back as I started reading this. At the end it's clear this Steve guy, who's not really Steve is a major JERK and needs to get what he has coming, which I'm sure he will eventually.
    ♥ your teases, Shelly. Another awesome suspense thriller ☺

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    1. Thanks, Mel! It makes the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck just thinking about this scene - which pretty much tells the tale of why we like to write this kind of stuff ;) I'm glad you enjoyed ... there will be more ... much more to come :)

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  2. :-O That Steve guy or whatever his name is, is a jerk! I hope that he gets what's coming to him, the meanie!

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    1. Yes, he is a jerk - there's no doubt about that! Unfortunately, he's not one of a kind :(

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  3. OOh. Someone's getting more than they bargained for!!! (I can't feel too sorry for her, though, as I love the strap :D) So, I'm wondering where this is leading - is this guy the New York Cop??? Only time will time. Pants. I need more. Now. Nice to see you back ;)

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    1. I can't reveal too much, but I can tell you this: I think you're going to like her new man, Jackson (the detective). I think you're going to like him a lot ;) Thanks so much, Christina, it's always good to be back on his hop :)

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  4. Ok - everybody above pretty much said what I wanted to say. Waiting for next week to see what's up about this NY cop.

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    1. I know you guys need more information, and I promise to share what I can without giving too much mystery away :) Thanks for stopping by, Daryl :)

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  5. GOODNESS!!! Caveat Emptor! So well written, a true word picture. I was scared for her.

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    1. Caveat Emptor ... I loved that! Thanks so much, Maggie - I'm scared for her, too :)

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