Welcome to
Wipitup! This is the spot where Melody gives authors a weekly opportunity to post a scene on her sinfully, sexy hump day hop. Up to now, I've only posted erotic spanking scenes from our latest work in progress, "Their Destiny". But this week, I'm going to mix it up a bit and present the dark intruder's POV. Hope
you enjoy this snippet from our erotic romance thriller that is still under construction! :)
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His shiny, gold key fit perfectly into the lock. Pushing open the heavy wooden door, he heard the hefty paws of that damn dog racing downstairs to see who came in. Even though the German shepherd seemed to recognize him, he still needed to undergo the ridiculous crotch-sniffing ceremony. When the dog was satisfied with his scent, the intruder offered a prepared deli treat to keep him occupied. Finally, the 5’11’’ average-looking man was free to roam upstairs.
He stood at the foot of her bed, mesmerized. Waking from a sound sleep, how would she react
when she saw a man’s reflection in her full-length mirror? Would she blink her eyes twice like an owl,
hoping it was a nightmare, or would she try to force out a pitiful scream as
terror compressed her chest? Of course,
she wouldn’t see him for long. His dark figure
would only appear for a few seconds and be gone before her dumb, barking mutt
came to rescue her.
Picking up a pillow, he slowly drew it to
his face and inhaled her delicious, clean fragrance. Was it a
blend of flowers and vanilla? Clutching it against his rib cage, he looked around the room. There was so much more to learn about
her, but his visits needed to be brief. Checking his watch, he knew she would be home from work soon. Until next time, my sweet.
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Thanks so much for coming by to see me! Before you continue on with your day, please hop around and visit some of the other authors. There's such good, hot reading out there just waiting for you! :) ~ shelly
Crotch sniffing.... (laughing my head off here) I'd have given him a slap on the snout instead of a deli treat.
ReplyDeleteOnce again you have me on edge here, Shelly. Who is this intruder? How'd he get the key? Why does the dog seem to know him? OH so many questions that need answers. ~sighs~
Although I can't give you the answers you want without ruining our mystery ... here is a REAL story that brought back the crotch-sniffing memory: When Mike and I were first married, we lived upstairs from some friends in an old house. They entered from the front door (because they owned the place), and we entered from the back door which led up to our apartment. Anyway, they had a rather LARGE German shepherd who ran to the door as soon as he heard my key go into the lock. I was always the first one home from work, so no one else was in the house at that time of day. No one, except Tong. Yes, his name was TONG, and as soon as I entered the dwelling, Mr. Tong would stick his snout in my crotch and literally lift me off the ground. I was 22 years old, and terrified of the hairy beast - so there was no chance I would ever slap him on the snout. Instead, I lifted my eyes to the heavens and prayed that my crotch smelled the same as it did the last time it was inspected by him. After he was satisfied with my scent, he would back up and let me pass. Obviously, we were never close. Believe me, it's funnier now than it was then. LOL! Thanks, as always, for stopping in to see me. :)
DeleteLOL Shelly, that's to funny. What's that saying? --the truth is often stranger than fiction--
DeleteI think you were to kind to Tong. I'd have taught him a lesson personally, like perhaps a snout full of cyan pepper, or a yummy doggie treat strategically placed in a mouse trap.
I really enjoyed the details in this scene; the points nicely built with and against the tension.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Joelle. I do love to write a dark scene. We probably have about six scenes from his POV, so I look forward to sharing more. Glad you enjoyed! :)
DeleteI'm with Melody... LOL at the crotch sniffing ceremony - and so damn true! The watcher is still watching, I see, and sneakily at that. What is that man's agenda? It can't be good. And yep - how'd he get the key? And why did the dog know him? WE NEED ANSWERS. Till next week Mssrs Douglas. :)
ReplyDeleteAs much as I'd love to give you answers to all of your questions, we wouldn't want to ruin the mystery of the story! Let's just agree that this man is up to no good and dogs have one hell of a good crotch-sniffing memory! (If you have the time, read my reply to Melody.) Hope I provided you with a little chuckle today, Ms. Mandara :)
DeleteNow that was creepy. I've definitely interested. :)
ReplyDeleteYes, he's a creepy one! So glad we captured your interest ... thanks, Jennifer :)
DeleteSuspense! What! Why! Where is this story! Aargh! (Also, I really enjoyed it!)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Tara ... love your comment! We're still writing this one ... but it's finally wrapping up. This is the second time we've written creepy characters, and it's been a blast! So glad you enjoyed the snippet! Hope you'll stay tuned for more! :)
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