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Tuesday, August 19, 2014

SEEN THROUGH THEIR WINDOW #WIP IT UP WEDNESDAY


Yes indeed, it’s time for WIP IT UP WEDNESDAY!!  We recently signed a contract for our upcoming novella, "The Author's Friends" and hope it will be published soon!  In this snippet, Dana sits at her computer on a cold night in January writing a scene for her newest book.
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Their suitcases were unpacked, and Kristin declared that she needed to freshen up with a shower.  In the meantime, Brad went back downstairs and asked the proprietors about good places to have dinner.

When he returned to the room, he fully expected that Kristin would be dressed and ready to go out for the evening.  He lightly knocked on the door before opening, so he wouldn’t catch her by surprise.  Stepping through the door, he caught a glimpse of her naked silhouette opposite the dark picture window. 
 
“Dana, how’s the writing going?”  Richard came back into the room to stoke the fire for her.  

“I’m on a roll,” she mumbled without looking up from her keyboard. 
 
“I brought you some juice to keep your energy up.”  Richard sat the glass down next to her, placed more wood on the fire and quietly shut the door behind him as he left.

Kristin motioned for Brad to come closer.  As he neared, she reached out and placed his hand on her bare, right breast.
 
“I hope you like what you see,” she whispered.  He pulled her close and clutched her bare ass in his hands.

Brad wasted no time removing his clothes.  The two of them stood naked across from the window, but neither seemed to care.  With a forceful shove, he pushed her back up against the wall holding both arms above her head.  Hungrily they kissed, his weight forcing her against the hard, cold surface pressing their bodies close.  His raging cock stood at full mast; the thick, smooth tip came in contact with the wetness between her legs. 

A few onlookers had gathered down on the street below.  A single light in the room made it easy for all to watch.  

They frantically pawed each other moving across the room; their kisses ravenous as she felt the coolness of the window behind her.  Brad leveraged her body upward with legs encircling his torso; her ass was nestled on the smooth marble ledge.  He wasted no time pushing into her slick entrance.  His thrusts were strong and forceful; the beads of sweat from her back smeared the double-paned window glass.  It only took a few moments for the two of them to explode into a powerful, simultaneous orgasm.  Kristin’s head was lodged against his perspired neck, holding on so she didn’t collapse to the floor.

Brad greedily pumped several more times, milking the sensation of his pleasure.  The tenseness eased from their bodies, and he lowered Kristin down on to her feet.  Neither was willing to let the other go.

The mood was suddenly broken when they heard applause.  A crowd of about two dozen people down on the street were looking up at them clapping and hooting.  There was nothing else they could do, but smile at the voyeuristic friendly faces. 

Dana sat back and knew she’d just scratched the surface of this blossoming romance.  It was too early in the book to reveal her plan for those two; she wanted to keep her readers guessing.

No sooner had she begun to scribble some notes down on a pad, Richard walked quietly back into the room with a sandwich on a plate and one eyebrow raised.  “When was the last time you ate, kitten?”

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I hope you enjoyed today’s scene … we are always happy when you visit!  Please continue hopping around to the other blogs by clicking on the cute 'froggy' link at the bottom of this post. There are some great authors waiting to share!  Happy Wednesday ~ shelly

16 comments:

  1. You better believe I enjoyed the scene, I was right there with the rest of the voyeurs. Great piece of writing.

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    1. Thanks so much, Leigh! I was hoping someone else would want to watch! :)

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  2. Don't we all love the thought of being caught in public---very nice.

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    1. Yeah, what is it about being caught? They didn't seem to mind at all! Thanks, Megan!!

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  3. Oh Shelly. This was like a story within a story. Or in this case a snippet within a snippet.
    Loved the window scene and felt like I too was one of the voyeurs on the street. Well more like watching from the corner of the room, just because then I could hear every breathy moan.
    Excellent Excerpt. TY for sharing ♥

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    1. Yep, a story within a story! I think there are five scenes that Dana writes, and since you enjoyed watching ... I'll do my best to share a few more!! TY for stopping by! :)

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  4. Wow Shelly! Reading this I felt like I was watching them too! Great snippet!

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    1. So glad you enjoyed! It was fun for us to imagine what Dana would want to write!! ;)

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  5. oh that's lovely :) It's so good to see how Richard supports Dana. I love how he responds to her being on a roll. And the story part with Brad and Kristen is just great, even to the end and the friendly voyeuristic faces.

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    1. Those of us who write - appreciate how important and special a supportive partner is!! Thanks so much for mentioning that, Joelle and glad you enjoyed the scene!! :)

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  6. Loved the excerpt - exhibitionism is soooo sexy - and loved your cover. The Author... ooh sounds deliciously hot, as does your lead male with his milking, dominant, wall-banging ways ~GRIN~ Yummmm

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    1. Personally, I love a wall-banger ... and he was our first - so I'm glad you thought it was a yummy scene!! I'm smiling over here! Thanks!! :)

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  7. Hello,
    I was wondering if you were aware that your book, The Author when downloaded from BN is unreadable?? from page 106 till the end?
    I let them know weeks ago, and it's still not fixed?

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    1. I was not aware of this problem, but thanks for letting me know ... and thanks for buying ... I'll contact BN asap!!:)

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  8. Hot! All they could do was smile at the onlookers? That made me giggle, I would have been mortified!

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    1. Yeah, I probably would have described their expressions as 'sheepish grins' ... but that was Dana's idea and I try not to sweat the small stuff with her! ;) So happy that you stopped by, Casey!! :)

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