It’s time for WIP IT UP WEDNESDAY… a
comfortable place where we can share our WIP or published works! Our snippet is, once again, from our upcoming
novella “The Author’s Friends” which I'm happy to announce - was recently accepted for publication! In this scene, Carla and
Michael wake up in Bedford Springs after an interesting evening together. She was just offered a position in the
governor’s administration and Michael is patiently awaiting her answer.
*****
He drummed his fingers on the chair. “I think I spied a container of bubble bath
by the tub. How long has it been since
anyone bathed you, peanut?”
“Hmm, that sounds like heaven, but does
the phrase ‘elephant in the room’ mean anything to you?”
“I think an elephant will be too large
for the bathroom, my dear. Let’s leave
it outside until a bit later, shall we?”
She smiled and continued to rock in the
chair, occasionally trying to peek in the window as he prepared her bath.
After waving Carla inside, Michael
quickly helped remove her coat and boots sending an anxious chill down her
spine. Her cold hand was taken in his
warm one as he led her to the bathroom and closed the door. The small room was balmy and soothing with
droplets of steam covering the mirror.
She slowly raised her arms allowing him to remove her sweater and bra,
unsnapped her tight jeans and tugged them off.
Sitting on the closed toilet he gently pulled her onto his lap to remove
a pair of thick socks, and as she stood, a quick, tender pat was administered
to her bum indicating his desire to watch Carla seductively slide her panties
down.
He slowly lowered her by hand into the
freestanding old-fashioned tub and kneeled on the floor, squirting more
fragrant soap into the warm water creating an abundance of bubbles. Drifting into a heavenly fantasy, her
thoughts wandered somewhere between a princess and a little girl as the bath
became lightly scented with lavender.
She suddenly took in a sharp breath to speak, but was stopped quickly
with a gentle touch to her lips.
“Shh-shh, don’t think too much, my love,
just relax and enjoy.”
He tilted her head back slowly,
saturating her hair with a cup of warm water and messaged a fragrant shampoo
into her scalp with strong, thick digits.
Her tired eyes closed as the soap was thoroughly rinsed out of her
blonde tresses, and he generously lathered a soft, white washcloth with which
to bathe her. Blissfully, she went with
the moment reclining onto a tub pillow as Michael’s attentiveness continued,
caressing her neck and breasts moving down into the soft folds of her tummy. When she was completely covered in suds, he
put the cloth aside and allowed his skillful hands to lightly stroke her skin,
smoothing away all stress and anxiety.
The moment that her upper body was rinsed clean, Michael rotated his
finger in a circular motion.
With a heavy sigh and a pout on her lips,
she turned over revealing her pink and very warm cheeks. On hands and knees with her round globes
barely floating out of the bubbles, he slid his soapy fingers up and down the
length of her vagina, skillfully cleansing and arousing her at the same moment. Tenderly, he circled her swollen clit a
number of times to the brink of excitement and then with a slow moving slippery
thumb, issued a warning to the cleft on her bottom. It was certainly no surprise to Carla that
his final destination would be her quivering small, smooth hole he enjoyed so
much. Circling the tender rim, around
and around, he finally pushed in gently with an expectation that she would arch
her back to invite his digit, right where she wanted to possess it. He loved to watch as she gradually backed
into his extremity, swallowing it up with the sway of her hips. It was an arousing visual for him; their
shared anal kink was obvious, and her flush of embarrassment only made it that
much more enjoyable … for both of them.
With a rinse and smack to her wet, wobbly
behind, bath time was officially over.
Her serious frown instantly let him know that she wished to remain in
the tub. But as he waited with an outstretched
towel and raised one eyebrow, she knew it was better to comply than ruin the
moment. Carla was dried gently, wrapped
in softness and pulled onto his lap as he sat back down on the closed toilet to
give her a warm, strong hug.
“Stay put and I’ll bring you a fresh pair
of panties. It’s time for us to talk.”
******
I hope you enjoyed today’s scene … it's always more fun when you visit! Please keep
hopping around to the other blogs on this list.
There are some great authors waiting to share! Happy Wednesday ~ shelly
That's my kinda bath time! WOWee. Loved the visual. All wandering fingers and bubbles - how decadent! If I had a bath time like that I wouldn't want it to end either!!! Yummy snippet :)
ReplyDeleteYes!! Finally wandering fingers that aren't hers!! Lol! Glad you enjoyed! :)
DeleteI want a bath like that too. I adore how attentive Michael is, but he's also a big tease and I love their anal kinkiness. If I were the elephant, I'd be peeking through the keyhole. ~smirks~
ReplyDeleteVery Hot excerpt, Shelly. Can I borrow Michael for a little while?
Of course you can borrow him, Melody! Though I never went to pre-school, I do know how to share! ;) So happy you enjoy their kinkiness ... there's no such thing as too much anal, right??
DeleteThat was hot as hell!! Who wouldn't love a bath like that??? It must be an important talk to not move to the bedroom!
ReplyDeleteAww ... thanks, Megan ... so glad you hopped over! I sure could use a bath like that ... where in the hell is Michael when you need him?? ;)
DeleteMichael sounds so perfect. Who wouldn't love a man who liked to prepare special baths for them. Plus, he has a sense of humor! :-D
ReplyDeleteI agree, the man is perfect! Wait ... let me think .... yep, in EVERY way!! ;) Thanks, Meredith!! :)
DeleteI love the sensual and exacting details you bring to this bath scene :) beautiful. and congrats on the acceptance
ReplyDeleteThanks, Joelle ... we are excited to have this published! This was such an important scene as Michael patiently waits for her decision. I'm so glad you liked it!
DeleteThere I was lying back closing my eyes enjoying that sensual, relaxing hairwash in my mind, when wham. I was wide awake again with the delicious teasing. I think I'd like Michael to bath me :) Lovely scene.
ReplyDeleteYou crack me up, Tara! What were the chances that bath would end without some serious teasing?? Thanks so much ... I'm happy you enjoyed!
DeleteI think I want him to give me a bath. What's coming sounds pretty inviting too.
ReplyDeleteA line seems to be forming outside their bathroom ... but I think I can get you in, Leigh!! Oh yes, he's the best!! :)
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