Yes indeed, it’s time for WIP IT UP WEDNESDAY!! We recently signed a contract for our upcoming novella, "The Author's Friends" and hope it will be published soon! In this snippet, Dana sits at her computer on a cold night in January writing a scene for her newest book.
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Their
suitcases were unpacked, and Kristin declared that she needed to freshen up
with a shower. In the meantime, Brad
went back downstairs and asked the proprietors about good places to have dinner.
When
he returned to the room, he fully expected that Kristin would be dressed and
ready to go out for the evening. He
lightly knocked on the door before opening, so he wouldn’t catch her by
surprise. Stepping through the
door, he caught a glimpse of her naked silhouette opposite the dark picture
window.
“Dana, how’s the writing going?” Richard came back into the room to stoke the
fire for her.
“I’m on a roll,” she mumbled without
looking up from her keyboard.
“I brought you some juice to keep your
energy up.” Richard sat the glass down
next to her, placed more wood on the fire and quietly shut the door behind him
as he left.
Kristin
motioned for Brad to come closer. As he
neared, she reached out and placed his hand on her bare, right breast.
“I
hope you like what you see,” she whispered.
He pulled her close and clutched her bare ass in his hands.
Brad
wasted no time removing his clothes. The
two of them stood naked across from the window, but neither seemed to care. With a forceful shove, he pushed her back up
against the wall holding both arms above her head. Hungrily they kissed, his weight forcing her
against the hard, cold surface pressing their bodies close. His raging cock stood at full mast; the
thick, smooth tip came in contact with the wetness between her legs.
A
few onlookers had gathered down on the street below. A single light in the room made it easy for
all to watch.
They
frantically pawed each other moving across the room; their kisses ravenous as
she felt the coolness of the window behind her.
Brad leveraged her body upward with legs encircling his torso; her ass was
nestled on the smooth marble ledge. He
wasted no time pushing into her slick entrance.
His thrusts were strong and forceful; the beads of sweat from her back smeared
the double-paned window glass. It only
took a few moments for the two of them to explode into a powerful, simultaneous
orgasm. Kristin’s head was lodged
against his perspired neck, holding on so she didn’t collapse to the floor.
Brad
greedily pumped several more times, milking the sensation of his pleasure. The tenseness eased from their bodies, and he
lowered Kristin down on to her feet.
Neither was willing to let the other go.
The
mood was suddenly broken when they heard applause. A crowd of about two dozen people down on the
street were looking up at them clapping and hooting. There was nothing else they could do, but
smile at the voyeuristic friendly faces.
Dana sat back and knew she’d just
scratched the surface of this blossoming romance. It was too early in the book to reveal her
plan for those two; she wanted to keep her readers guessing.
No sooner had she begun to scribble some
notes down on a pad, Richard walked quietly back into the room with a sandwich
on a plate and one eyebrow raised. “When
was the last time you ate, kitten?”
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share! Happy Wednesday ~ shelly
You better believe I enjoyed the scene, I was right there with the rest of the voyeurs. Great piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Leigh! I was hoping someone else would want to watch! :)
DeleteDon't we all love the thought of being caught in public---very nice.
ReplyDeleteYeah, what is it about being caught? They didn't seem to mind at all! Thanks, Megan!!
DeleteOh Shelly. This was like a story within a story. Or in this case a snippet within a snippet.
ReplyDeleteLoved the window scene and felt like I too was one of the voyeurs on the street. Well more like watching from the corner of the room, just because then I could hear every breathy moan.
Excellent Excerpt. TY for sharing ♥
Yep, a story within a story! I think there are five scenes that Dana writes, and since you enjoyed watching ... I'll do my best to share a few more!! TY for stopping by! :)
DeleteWow Shelly! Reading this I felt like I was watching them too! Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteSo glad you enjoyed! It was fun for us to imagine what Dana would want to write!! ;)
Deleteoh that's lovely :) It's so good to see how Richard supports Dana. I love how he responds to her being on a roll. And the story part with Brad and Kristen is just great, even to the end and the friendly voyeuristic faces.
ReplyDeleteThose of us who write - appreciate how important and special a supportive partner is!! Thanks so much for mentioning that, Joelle and glad you enjoyed the scene!! :)
DeleteLoved the excerpt - exhibitionism is soooo sexy - and loved your cover. The Author... ooh sounds deliciously hot, as does your lead male with his milking, dominant, wall-banging ways ~GRIN~ Yummmm
ReplyDeletePersonally, I love a wall-banger ... and he was our first - so I'm glad you thought it was a yummy scene!! I'm smiling over here! Thanks!! :)
DeleteHello,
ReplyDeleteI was wondering if you were aware that your book, The Author when downloaded from BN is unreadable?? from page 106 till the end?
I let them know weeks ago, and it's still not fixed?
I was not aware of this problem, but thanks for letting me know ... and thanks for buying ... I'll contact BN asap!!:)
DeleteHot! All they could do was smile at the onlookers? That made me giggle, I would have been mortified!
ReplyDeleteYeah, I probably would have described their expressions as 'sheepish grins' ... but that was Dana's idea and I try not to sweat the small stuff with her! ;) So happy that you stopped by, Casey!! :)
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