I do love WIP IT UP WEDNESDAY! If it’s your first time joining us, we either
share a work in progress or something from a published work on this blog
hop. This week – I’m bringing you
another installment from ‘The Author’s Friends’ – which we REALLY hope will be
published soon because I am seriously running.out.of.snippets! In this week’s scene – Richard is trying to
comfort Dana, who is worried that her best friend, Carla, may accept a job in
Harrisburg and move away.
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Dana returned
to the den and found Richard waiting for her on the couch. Dressed in her favorite cupcake pajamas with
her hair pulled back in a ponytail, she crawled into his warm, strong arms.
“I know you
can’t go back into therapy with Michael, but have you thought about seeing
someone else? If Carla does take that
job in Harrisburg, I’m worried it might set you back emotionally.”
Dana looked
up at him with tears welled in her eyes.
“I don’t need anyone but you, Richard.”
He kissed
her on the cheek and held her close. “I
can’t even imagine what will go on over at Carla and Michael’s house
tomorrow. How is she ever going to make
a decision like that?”
“I know what
I would do.” She snuggled closer into
the warmth of his chest.
“Promise me
you won’t try to sway her, darlin’. I
know we never discussed maintenance spankings, but maybe this would be a good
time. Do you feel like you could use a
good cry? I could take you over my knee
and give you just what you need.”
“I’ve read
about that type of spanking, and there seems to be a mix of opinions on whether
they work. Some people give them
regularly and others like the element of surprise.” Dana sounded a little
skeptical.
“Everyone
has a different type of relationship, so I guess it’s up to the
individuals. We don’t have to decide
today, but I think an emotional release would be good for you right now.”
In silent
agreement, Dana withdrew her hands from his neck allowing him to guide her off
his lap. Richard gently positioned her
across his knees, so that her head and arms were resting comfortably on their
leather couch. He rubbed her behind
lovingly with his hand and slid her pajama bottoms below her bare bum.
He spanked
her lightly at first, alternating between cheeks and then increased the
firmness of his hand - just enough to have an effect on her subconscious. There wasn’t a lecture, his palm did all the
talking, and she knew exactly what it was saying. He spanked her slowly and methodically until
cleansing tears started to flow. As the
color of her bottom transformed from a soft pink to a rosy hue, she turned her
head to the side silently indicating that she was content.
“Okay,
kitten … let’s get you back into my lap to cuddle.”
She nodded
with tears streaming, nose running and arms open wide. Returning to his lap, they kissed and
hugged. Wiping her nose, she was
reassured of his unconditional love and reminded that the structure they lived
within was their solid foundation.
Within
minutes she felt safe, secure and was asleep in his arms.
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Thanks so much for stopping by to see me,
and before you go, don’t forget to hop over to some of the other blogs. There’s such great reading just waiting for
you! ~ shelly
from cupcake pajamas to tears streaming down cheeks - great snippet.
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Thanks so much, Daryl! I'm glad you enjoyed ... and thanks for the tweet! It's very much appreciated! :)
DeleteAwww! I'm just starting to read your first book, The Author. I love Richard and Dana. They're perfect for one another.
ReplyDeleteI'm so happy you like Richard and Dana! I'll be curious to hear what you think of the book when you finish it! Hopefully, you'll enjoy Michael and Carla just as much! Thanks, Meredith - I really appreciate you coming by to comment! :)
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ReplyDeleteThis is such a sweet excerpt. I feel the love Dana and Richard have for each other and it's touching the way he always considers her needs. This is so close to the truth for what most couples feel when they start exploring DD D/s and spankings. As with most of us, what works for one person, or one couple, may not work with another. So the passive way Richard brings up maintenance spankings is quite endearing.
I am in love with this line "There wasn’t a lecture, his palm did all the talking, and she knew exactly what it was saying."
Dana and Richard are just so in-tune with one another.
Wonderful and heartwarming excerpt... it just makes me want to hug you. ~Hugs!~
Aww - thanks for the hug, Melody ... I really could use it right now!! I'm so glad you enjoyed this scene ... they really do understand and cherish each other - and even though this second book is mainly about Michael and Carla - we felt the need to include Richard and Dana as much as possible! Thanks for your wonderful comment ... I needed it today! :)
Delete☺Not sure what has you down, but it makes me happy to have brought a needed symbolic hug and a smile to your day. It's the little things sometimes that get us through the day ;-) Happy I was part of yours. ~Hugs~
DeleteYes, you did bring a smile to my day and I thank you for that!! :) ~Hugs~
Deleteaww I love this scene, Shelly. But then it reminds me of maintenance spanking conversations with my Master- those ended up largely funny, but this is quite the romantic, emotional scene that I'd had in my head :D I can't wait until this book comes out. Richard is so good for Dana here
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you liked the scene! I agree ... Richard knows her emotional needs and really comes through! I'm so happy you are excited about the book coming out! Thanks for your nice comment, Joelle!! :)
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