Welcome to WIP IT UP Wednesday! While waiting patiently
for ‘The Author’s Friends’ to be published, we decided to bring a WIP back to life that had been put on a shelf! Under the working title of 'The Sail of Their Lives', this is a murder mystery woven into a DD/Erotic Romance with just a touch of Age-Play. :) Here’s a quick snippet:
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Jackie felt large hands reach under her skirt; a warm thumb gently stroked over
her cotton panties as they became moist with her arousal.
“Slide your panties down right now,” the deep, clear voice
instructed.
“Should
I take them all the way off?”
“Pull
them down to your knees, young lady, not further.”
“Yes,
sir,” she whispered.
As
she slowly slid her cotton underpants down, her skirt was raised in the
front. She held onto broad shoulders
as the flat of his slick tongue slowly licked her vagina from bottom to top,
carefully and gently circling her fleshy knob with a pointy, wet tip.
“You’re
so sweet and soft, my love.”
“Oh
God, don’t stop … don’t stop …” Her clitoris quivered as he sucked and nibbled her
silky flesh.
“You
know the rules. If you come before I
give permission, I will take you over my knee and spank your bare bottom, young
lady. I mean it, Jackie … don’t you
dare!”
She
grabbed the sides of his head as he suddenly thrust his tongue inside her
soaked pussy - fucking her over and over again.
Her trembling knees buckled as an intense orgasm swept over her body.
He
caught her in his strong arms and stood her up.
“You really could have hung on a little longer." His head tilted to the side
as a crooked smile formed on his lips. "I see no point in pulling up your panties ...”
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Thanks so
much for stopping by, and before you go, don’t forget to visit the other blogs
on this hop. There’s some great reading
out there waiting for you!
~ shelly
Very hot snippet. I'm not one of those women who can hold on or come on demand, and I applaud those who are.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much ...I'm glad you enjoyed!! :)
DeleteDelightful snippet today, Shelly. I enjoyed how you turned the tables a bit with Jackie getting an orgasm first, then a spanking.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if she likes her spankings and much as his tongue lashings *winks*
The Sails of our Lives sounds like a great new story ☺
Thanks, Melody! I happen to know that Jackie enjoys a little bit of everything!! I'm so happy to be able to finally share some scenes with you - we've been talking about getting back to work on this for so long now!! And thanks for all your efforts on running this hop, as always, it's very much appreciated! :)
DeleteOh wow! Panties around knees... and orgasming without permission. THAT CALLS FOR A SPANKING!!! Oh God. Oh God. I blame you for all this excitement... it's doing funny things to my blood pressure :D Fantasticly delicious snippet as always...
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you enjoyed this, Christina! Panties around the knees and an orgasm without permission just do something to me, too! It's the simple things in life, right? Thanks for stopping by to see me!! :)
DeleteThanks, Meredith!! I think she's looking forward to it!! ;)
ReplyDeleteoo this is promisingly hot :) loved it
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for your nice comment, Joelle ... I promise - there's more heat on the way!! :)
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